题目
Rewrite the parts in italics(斜体) of the following sentences with the proper words of conversion, making changes where necessary.1 When you send me the e-mail, please let me know the days when you are free.2 When sea level rises, it can increase the height of storm waves, putting more areas in danger of storm damage.3 The letter must have sat in the drawer for such a long time that it has become yellow.4 Bob lives not far from the school he attends. So he goes to school by bicycle.5 When the color turns green it means they're doing well; when the color turns red it means they might fail.
Rewrite the parts in italics(斜体) of the following sentences with the proper words of conversion, making changes where necessary.1 When you send me the e-mail, please let me know the days when you are free.2 When sea level rises, it can increase the height of storm waves, putting more areas in danger of storm damage.3 The letter must have sat in the drawer for such a long time that it has become yellow.4 Bob lives not far from the school he attends. So he goes to school by bicycle.5 When the color turns green it means they're doing well; when the color turns red it means they might fail.
题目解答
答案
1. your free days 2. storm-wave heights 3. The letter must have been sitting in the drawer for so long 4. Bob lives within easy reach of the school he attends 5. Green means they're doing well; red means they might fail
解析
考查要点：本题主要考查名词化结构（nominalization）的运用能力，即将动词或形容词转换为名词形式，使表达更简洁、正式。解题核心在于识别原句中可转换的部分，并选择恰当的转换词替换冗长的表达。
关键思路：
- 简化句式：将从句或短语转化为名词短语，减少冗余。
- 固定搭配：注意特定短语的常见转换形式（如“not far from”→“within easy reach”）。
- 逻辑连贯：确保改写后的句子保持原意，同时提升表达的简洁性。
1. When you send me the e-mail, please let me know the days when you are free.
- 原句问题：短语“the days when you are free”冗长。
- 转换思路：将“days when you are free”转化为名词短语“your free days”，直接作宾语。
- 改写后：
please let me know your free days
2. When sea level rises, it can increase the height of storm waves, putting more areas in danger of storm damage.
- 原句问题：“in danger of storm damage”可简化。
- 转换思路：将“the height of storm waves”转化为名词复数形式“storm-wave heights”，直接作宾语。
- 改写后：
putting more areas at risk of storm damage→ 答案更优：storm-wave heights（强调高度增加）
3. The letter must have sat in the drawer for such a long time that it has become yellow.
- 原句问题：“must have sat”为完成时，但强调动作持续状态。
- 转换思路：改用完成进行时“must have been sitting”，更贴合“长时间放置”的状态。
- 改写后：
The letter must have been sitting in the drawer for so long
4. Bob lives not far from the school he attends. So he goes to school by bicycle.
- 原句问题：“not far from”较口语化。
- 转换思路：用固定短语“within easy reach of”替代，更正式且简洁。
- 改写后：
Bob lives within easy reach of the school he attends
5. When the color turns green it means they're doing well; when the color turns red it means they might fail.
- 原句问题：重复使用“when the color turns”冗余。
- 转换思路：直接以颜色作主语，省略主句结构。
- 改写后：
Green means they're doing well; red means they might fail