题目
Suppose your university is selecting some students to teach kids in remote rural areas during the coming vacation. You are now to write an application letter to the university to explain why you want to take part and what you can do for the kids. You will have 30 minutes to write the letter. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
Suppose your university is selecting some students to teach kids in remote rural areas during the coming vacation. You are now to write an application letter to the university to explain why you want to take part and what you can do for the kids. You will have 30 minutes to write the letter. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
题目解答
答案
给平Dear Sir or Madam, I am Li Hua, a sophomore of our university. I am writing this letter for applying for the chance to teach kids in remote rural areas during the coming vacation. Education is crucial to the progress, prosperity and civilization of the whole nation. Thus, it is necessary for everyone to receive education. However, it is hard for kids in remote rural areas to be well educated. The program is therefore of great value to bridge the education gap. I hope I can attend it and contribute. I am sure that I am qualified for the job. First, enclosed with this letter is my resume, which details my previous work experience as an English teacher. In addition, my cheerful personality also makes me a suitable candidate for the job. Besides, I am also a good singer and I hope 1 can bring them happiness with my singing. Thank you for considering my application for the job. If I could go there, it would become an unforgettable and meaningful experience for my life. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Li Hua给平
解析
考查要点:本题主要考查学生撰写正式申请信的能力,需包含自我介绍、参与动机、个人优势说明及结尾礼貌用语。核心思路是通过清晰的结构和诚恳的语言,展示申请者对教育事业的热情及胜任能力。关键点包括:明确表达参与动机(如教育公平)、突出相关经验(如教学经历、特长)以及语言的正式性。
结构解析
- 开头:标准书信格式,包含称呼、自我介绍及申请目的。
- 主体段落:
- 动机陈述:强调偏远地区教育现状及自身参与的价值。
- 资格说明:通过简历、性格、特长展示胜任能力。
- 结尾:表达感谢并期待回复。
语言亮点
- 连接词:如"However"、"Besides",使逻辑清晰。
- 情感表达:用"unforgettable and meaningful experience"体现真诚。