Hi,Janice, It’s been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing. As I tell you last time,I made three new friend here.We hang out together during lunch and after school.We’ve been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars.It’s been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many.And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity!In fact,I don’t like to go anymore,so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship.How do you think I should do?If you are me,would you talk to him? Please help with me and give me some advice. Grace

步骤 1：检查并修正第一段中的错误
- "want share" 应改为 "want to share"，因为 "want" 后面需要跟不定式 "to"。
步骤 2：检查并修正第二段中的错误
- "tell you last time" 应改为 "told you last time"，因为这是过去时态。
- "friend" 应改为 "friends"，因为前面的数字是 "three"，所以需要复数形式。
- "spending a lot of time sing" 应改为 "spending a lot of time singing"，因为 "spend time doing" 是固定搭配。
- "costs me many" 应改为 "costs me much"，因为 "cost" 后面跟的是不可数名词 "money"，所以用 "much"。
- "so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship" 应改为 "but I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship"，因为这里表示转折关系。
- "How do you think I should do" 应改为 "What do you think I should do"，因为这里询问的是建议，所以用 "what"。
- "If you are me" 应改为 "If you were me"，因为这是虚拟语气，表示与现在事实相反的情况。
- "talk to him" 应改为 "talk to them"，因为前面提到的是 "their friendship"，所以用复数形式。
步骤 3：检查并修正第三段中的错误
- "help with me" 应改为 "help me"，因为 "help" 后面直接跟宾语，不需要 "with"。