题目
22【其它】WritingPlease write a character sketch of a person you are most familiar with in about two hundred words, using the writing skills introduced in Unit Five.
22【其它】
Writing
Please write a character sketch of a person you are most familiar with in about two hundred words, using the writing skills introduced in Unit Five.
题目解答
答案
本文以母亲为主题,分为三部分:外貌描写(中等身材、慈祥面容)、性格特点(勤劳、善良、有爱心)、具体表现(早起做饭、辅导学习、帮助邻居)。结尾点明母亲对我成长的影响及感激之情。全文约200字,紧扣“人物素描”要求,避免空泛评价,注重细节刻画。
作文如下:
My mother is a woman of medium build, with a kind face and gentle eyes. Her hair is usually tied back simply, and she prefers wearing comfortable, plain clothes. Though her appearance is ordinary, her presence is warm and inviting.
She is the backbone of our family. Every morning, she wakes up early to prepare breakfast and make sure everything is in order before we leave for school and work. In the evening, she helps me with my homework and stays up late to ensure the house is tidy. Despite her busy schedule, she never complains and always wears a smile.
My mother is also a compassionate person. She often volunteers to help our neighbors, especially those with young children or elderly family members. Once, when Mrs. Li next door was hospitalized, my mother took turns visiting her and even did her grocery shopping. Her kindness extends beyond our family, making her a beloved figure in the community.
What I admire most about my mother is her ability to balance strictness and tenderness. She sets high expectations for me but is always there to offer comfort and guidance. Her unwavering support and selfless love have shaped me into the person I am today.
In conclusion, my mother is not only a caregiver but also a role model. Her dedication and kindness inspire me to be a better person every day. I am grateful to have her in my life, and I hope to one day be as remarkable as she is.
解析
本题考查人物素描(character sketch)的写作能力,要求以熟悉的人为主题,运用第五单元介绍的写作写作技巧,撰写约200词的人物速写,并对作文进行评价。
作文选取母亲作为描写对象,结构清晰,分为三部分:外貌描写(中等身材、慈祥面容、温柔眼睛、简洁发型、舒适素衣)、性格特点(勤劳、善良、有爱心、严格与温柔并重)、具体表现(早起做饭、辅导作业辅导、深夜整理家务、帮助邻居如照顾住院的李太太)。结尾通过“她的坚定支持和无私的爱塑造了今天的我”“不仅是照顾者,也是榜样”等语句,点明母亲对“我”成长的影响及感激之情。全文约200词,紧扣“人物素描”要求,避免空泛评价,通过“早起准备早餐”“熬夜整理家务”“轮流看望住院的李太太并代买 groceries”等细节刻画人物,符合写作技能要求。