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阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。-|||-It was the end of the summer holiday,and school would open in two weeks,which-|||-means we kids only had a very short period of time to enjoy.However, the holiday was so-|||-boring that it was impossible for me to find something fun to do.When I had successfully-|||-contacted all of my friends,one of them suggested that we all should go down to the sea and-|||-just relax.-|||-It wasn`t fun at first, just relaxing on the beach, seeing an old man repair an-|||-ancient-looking boat,but it was clearly on our minds to jump into the sea and just take a-|||-swim in the clear cold water because it was getting so hot.So we stripped off our clothes and-|||-dived into the water.The salt water was so truly cool and refreshing that we splashed cold-|||-water in each other`s faces.-|||-"You shouldn`t swim that day,"The old man advised."There is a storm coming up."-|||-Enjoying the soft sea wind,I didn`t take it scriously."If you go further there you`ll be sorry,"-|||-the old man called after me."Thanks for your reminding,we know very well in our heart."I-|||-replied and walked into the gentle waves. We were having so much fun that I didn`t notice-|||-how far I had reached into the sea as the water had almost reached my chest.-|||-Suddenly,a gust of wind lifted a huge wave over me and threw me further away.My-|||-friends failed to reach me so they swam ashore and screamed for help. Then white caps began-|||-rolling in and it became harder to swim against the currents. Before I knew it,before I could-|||-do anything to maintain my balance in the deep water, I was bringing my whole entire body-|||-into the sea.-|||-注意:-|||-1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;-|||-2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;-|||-3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;-|||-4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。-|||-Frightencd,I tried to resurface from the water.-|||-Then,just as it seemed as if I would sink into the sea,I heard a loud voice.

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本题考查读后续写能力，要求根据给定短文情节进行续写，构成完整故事。解题思路如下：

  1. 理解原文：故事讲述“我”和朋友在海边游泳，未听从老人关于暴风雨来临的劝告，“我”游到较深水域后被巨浪卷入海中，朋友上岸求救。
  2. 确定续写方向：第一段以“Frightened, I tried to resurface from the water.”开头，应围绕“我”在水中挣扎的情景展开，体现“我”的恐惧、疲惫以及对未听劝告的后悔。第二段以“Then, just as it seemed as if I would sink into the sea, I heard a loud voice.”开头，要引出救“我”的人，结合前文老人的提醒，可推测是老人来救“我”，描述“我”获救的过程。
  3. 运用关键词：至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语，如“storm”“old man”“waves”“currents”“sink”等。
  4. 控制字数：续写短文词数应为150左右。

第一段解析

“Frightened, I tried to resurface from the water.”表明“我”处于极度恐惧中并努力浮出水面。“I spared no effort to resurface.”进一步强调“我”奋力挣扎。“However, it didn't work.”说明“我”的努力没有成效。“The storm was so huge that I couldn't pull myself out of the water.”点明暴风雨的威力，解释“我”无法浮出水面的原因。“After a while, I felt rather tired and out of breath.”描述“我”在水中挣扎一段时间后的状态。“I almost gave up the thought that I would lose my life in the sea and also felt regret that I didn't listen to what the old man told me before.”体现“我”的绝望和对未听老人劝告的后悔。“I felt deeper and deeper into the wave.”说明“我”的处境越来越危险。

第二段解析

“Then, just as it seemed as if I would sink into the sea, I heard a loud voice.”引出关键情节，“我”在即将沉没时听到声音。“It was the old man who was rowing his boat to me.”揭示救“我”的人是老人，呼应前文老人的提醒。“And he shouted as loudly as possible, so I could hear him.”描述老人呼喊的情景。“Then I screamed to him and waved my hand quickly.”表现“我”看到老人后的激动和求救的急切。“I was saved at last.”点明“我”最终获救的结果。“How lucky I was. I was saved by the old man.”表达“我”对被老人救起的庆幸。