假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。My mom is really concerning with the health of everyone in our families. In order to make surely all of us are in good health, and she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have the bowl of egg soup while I had to eat an apple. My dad don't like the soup and I don't enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we're forced eat things, we may become ill.But he insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food what is provided by Mom with appreciation..
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My mom is really concerning with the health of everyone in our families. In order to make surely all of us are in good health, and she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have the bowl of egg soup while I had to eat an apple. My dad don't like the soup and I don't enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we're forced eat things, we may become ill.
But he insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food what is provided by Mom with appreciation.
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答案
【答案】
1. concerning改为concerned；
2. families改为family；
3. surely改为sure；
4. 去掉and；
5. the改为a；
6. had改为have；
7. don't改为doesn't；
8. forced后添加to；
9. he改为she；
10. what改为that。
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解析
"concerning"意为“关于”，而"concerned"意为“关心的”，根据句意，应使用"concerned"。
步骤 2：改正families为family
"family"在这里指“家庭”，是单数形式，因此应使用"family"。
步骤 3：改正surely为sure
"surely"意为“肯定地”，而"sure"意为“确定的”，根据句意，应使用"sure"。
步骤 4：删除and
"and"在这里是多余的，因为前面已经有"In order to"，不需要再用"and"。
步骤 5：改正the为a
"the"是特指，而"a"是泛指，根据句意，应使用"a"。
步骤 6：改正had为have
"had"是过去式，而"have"是现在式，根据句意，应使用"have"。
步骤 7：改正don't为doesn't
"don't"是第一人称和第二人称的否定形式，而"doesn't"是第三人称的否定形式，根据句意，应使用"doesn't"。
步骤 8：在forced后添加to
"forced"后面需要加"to"，构成"force sb. to do sth."结构。
步骤 9：改正he为she
"he"是男性代词，而"she"是女性代词，根据句意，应使用"she"。
步骤 10：改正what为that
"what"是疑问代词，而"that"是关系代词，根据句意，应使用"that"。