题目

2. (30.0分) Suppose you are invited to put forward a proposal to the university on how to make students' campus life easier, you are now to write an essay to make your proposal. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

2. (30.0分) Suppose you are invited to put forward a proposal to the university on how to make students' campus life easier, you are now to write an essay to make your proposal. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

题目解答

答案

这是一道典型的英语应用文写作题，要求写一份建议书（Proposal）。

题目解析与推理过程：

  1. 明确写作任务： 题目要求假设你受邀向大学提交一份提案（proposal），主题是“如何让学生们的校园生活更轻松（how to make students' campus life easier）”。你需要写一篇文章来阐述你的建议。
  2. 确定文体与语气： 这是一篇正式的建议书。语气应该客观、礼貌且具有建设性。文章结构需要清晰，通常采用三段式结构。
  3. 构思文章结构：
    • 第一段（引出话题）： 开门见山，说明写作的目的，即为了改善学生校园生活提出一些建议。可以简要提及当前校园生活中存在的一些小痛点（如食堂排队久、图书馆座位少等），以此引出你的提案。
    • 第二段（提出具体建议）： 这是文章的主体部分。你需要提出 1-2 个具体、可行且能切实让学生生活变“轻松”的建议。
      • 思路举例 1（饮食方面）： 建议食堂引入线上订餐系统，减少排队时间。
      • 思路举例 2（学习设施）： 建议延长图书馆开放时间或增加自习室插座。
      • 思路举例 3（交通/生活）： 建议增加校内班车班次，方便学生往返宿舍和教学楼。
        提出建议后，要简要说明理由，即这些措施是如何让校园生活变得更轻松的。
    • 第三段（总结展望）： 总结你的建议，并礼貌地表达希望学校能采纳这些建议，共同创造更好的校园环境。
  4. 注意字数与时间限制： 文章字数要求在 120 到 180 词之间，时间限制为 30 分钟。因此，语言要精炼，不要长篇大论。

参考范文：

A Proposal for Easier Campus Life

To enhance the overall experience of students at our university, I am writing to propose some practical measures to make our campus life easier and more convenient. While our university provides a rich academic environment, certain aspects of daily life can still be improved to reduce stress for students.

Firstly, I suggest optimizing the dining services in the canteens. Currently, peak hours are often overcrowded, leading to long queues and limited seating. Implementing an online food ordering system with designated pick-up times would significantly save students' time. Secondly, expanding the opening hours of the library and study rooms, especially during exam weeks, is highly recommended. Many students struggle to find quiet places to study late into the evening. Providing more comfortable study environments with sufficient power outlets would greatly facilitate our academic pursuits.

I believe these practical changes would greatly improve the efficiency and quality of students' daily lives. I hope the university administration will consider these suggestions to create a more student-friendly campus.