题目

Directions: Please write a Narration according to the information given below. You should write at least 100 words but no more than 120 words.很多人都喜欢旅行。旅行可以让人放松心情，开阔眼界，相信你也去过很多地方旅行。请根据自身的一段旅行经历，写一篇记叙文。内容提示：（1）旅行的时间、地点。（2）旅行的经历，如发生的趣事、品尝的美食或观看的演出等。（3）简要谈一谈自己对旅行的感受。

题目解答

答案

A Pleasant TripNowadays, a large number of people prefer to travel on holiday. Traveling can not only relax ourselves but broaden our horizons. I had a pleasant trip last summer holiday.I took the high-speed train to Beijing with my parents. It was the first time I went to Beijing. I was very excited for Beijing is the capital of China, and there are so many places I can visit. During the five-day trip, we visited the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace, and the Great Wall. They were so spectacular and I took a lot of photos. I also learned a lot about history when we were visiting. Meanwhile, we also tasted a lot of local specialties, such as Beijing Roast Duck and sugar-coated haws on a stick, etc. They were delicious, and I also bought some souvenirs for my grandparents.Short and tiring, but it was really a pleasant trip. I love Beijing, and I will go to Beijing again sometime.

解析

本题要求根据给定信息写一篇记叙文，考察记叙文的写作能力，包括内容的完整性、语言的准确性和逻辑性。具体需涵盖旅行的时间、地点、经历（趣事、美食或演出等）以及对旅行的感受，字数要求100-120词。

解题思路

开篇点题：引入旅行的普遍性及意义（放松心情、开阔眼界），自然过渡到个人经历。
旅行基本信息：明确时间（去年暑假）和地点（北京），说明出行方式（高铁）及初次前往的兴奋感。
旅行经历详述：
- 景点参观：列举故宫、颐和园、长城，突出其壮观并提及拍照和学习历史。
- 美食体验：介绍北京烤鸭、冰糖葫芦等特色美食，强调美味及购买纪念品的细节。
感受总结：用“短暂且疲惫但愉快”概括旅行，表达对北京的热爱及再次前往的意愿。

内容分析

时间与地点：明确为“last summer holiday”（去年暑假）和“Beijing”（北京），符合要求。
旅行经历：涵盖景点参观（Palace Museum, Summer Palace, Great Wall）、美食品尝（Beijing Roast Duck, sugar-coated haws）及购物（souvenirs），丰富且具体。
感受：通过“Short and tiring, but it was really a pleasant trip”“I love Beijing, and I will go to Beijing again sometime”传达积极感受，符合题意。

语言规范

句式多样，运用并列句（“not only...but also...”）、状语从句（“when we were visiting”）等，语言流畅。
词汇丰富，如“spectacular”“specialties”“souvenirs”等，准确描述经历。
字数控制在100-120词，符合要求。